[Panky]

• The site does nothing to make you want to click somewhere and explore the site.
  
  The layout of the page does not flow. It looks cluttered and unorganized.
  
  I personally wouldn't use the light blue type fill for the second table. Hard on the eyes.
  
  There is no active links on the second table. The topics are underlined, but you can't click them to go anywhere. I'd make them clickable.
  
  Where's the eroticism? There's nothing on the site that would play into the "I'm horny and want to read erotic stories".
  
  The backgrounds on the pages don't blend well. The backgrounds should remain in the background and not draw attention away from what you are reading.