X Nations - View Single Post - I would like some feed back on my site..could some of you review it for me...thanks!!

Panky · 07-26-2004, 10:34 AM

Welcum to XNations!

As for the site...

I'm personally not thrilled about the color choices at all. Having that bright of a background will deter people. It is too much.

On the first sample video, I would clean up the screen cap a bit. It's not the best quality to use as a preview thumb. The video plays well. It's not too long and doesn't give away too much pink.

On the 3rd video, you are giving away too much. You should cut the video where it is a tease and then almost at the very end, show him fingering her.

The very last video is too long. It is 32 seconds. When you look at the whole tour, you are giving away pretty much. Try to keep the videos between 15-20 secs. Some were around 22 secs and that's ok.

The idea is to tease your surfer and leave them wanting for more so they join your site.

Overall, the site is good. The layout works. All your links work. The videos play well.

07-26-2004, 10:34 AM	#8
Panky Panky is the Queen of Mean Moderator Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Montréal Posts: 4,780 xBucks: 45,053	Welcum to XNations! As for the site... I'm personally not thrilled about the color choices at all. Having that bright of a background will deter people. It is too much. On the first sample video, I would clean up the screen cap a bit. It's not the best quality to use as a preview thumb. The video plays well. It's not too long and doesn't give away too much pink. On the 3rd video, you are giving away too much. You should cut the video where it is a tease and then almost at the very end, show him fingering her. The very last video is too long. It is 32 seconds. When you look at the whole tour, you are giving away pretty much. Try to keep the videos between 15-20 secs. Some were around 22 secs and that's ok. The idea is to tease your surfer and leave them wanting for more so they join your site. Overall, the site is good. The layout works. All your links work. The videos play well.