toon feedback...

[XXXPhoto]

Did the following toon on spec this week but the guy is MIA now...

Was wanting to get feedback/critique on it if anyone cares to offer
their opinions... His eyes need some work I know... lol...

(toon was for bukkake site btw...)

[Torn Rose]

your boobs are not that big and I do not have a gotee....

but yes, the eyes are kinda weird.

[sweet7]

lol, that's great I think the bukkake shot needs some work, I had to look closely to notice it was there.

[XXXPhoto]

Torn,

You are just pissed I ain't posted a pic of my cock here yet... lol


Sweet7,

Thank you for comments, will play with the opacity settings some and see if can make the 'jizz' stand out more

[TheLegacy]

great toon - reminds me of back in highschool when I would draw the girls sitting around me in provocative manners with the band members of KISS

[Torn Rose]

No XXXPhoto, I am pissed you haven’t held me since last Jan. speaking of which, where were you in August?

[XXXPhoto]

Legacy,

What a coincidence! When I was in High School I'd try to draw the band girls to me and get them to KISS my member provocatively... talk about a small world... lol


Torn,

Statewide golf tourney that week and family reunion on the weekend of the Aug show... :^(

[Evil Chris]

I love the toon XXXPhoto... but shouldn't the girl be the center of attention?

[XXXPhoto]

Chris,

In this instance no; was for Mr. Bukkake site... hence the portly fellow poppin his load on the lass...

Good thing about vectors though is if this sale doesn't pan out I can tweak it so he's fucking her and have her pooter showing... I think that would bring her more in focus