The first link to your sponsor on each page doesn't work. You need to double check this before you submit to any TGPs.
Why?
for one thing some TGPs may just refuse the gallery for that.
Two.
You won't be sending the surfers to your sponsor when they click those links so you won't make any money even if some tgps do accept the galleries.
Three
You can't fix it once it's submitted or you risk being blacklisted.
About the text.
"It was such a turn on to see his limp cock pull out of her wet hole!"
Most strait guys would be more focused on the female part of the anatomy rather than the guys limp cock.
Secondly
It seems you're trying to appeal to a voyeuristic crowd with the text but it's not a voyeur gallery.
I know the guys surfing are sort of voyeurs but you're trying to sell a fantasy not a voyeur experience.
I would try something like this for text.
"I felt my cock being squeezed by her pink pussy and I shot my load into her"
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